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January 22, 2019
By Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
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Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life: it goes on.&rdquo; <br /> ― Robert Frost

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I see the pain fill your eyes and overflow,

Streaking your face like a canvas.

Your thoughts tell a story that I only know.


Your bloodstained hands pick up the shards,

A broken heart leaves such a mess sometimes.

I can only wonder when you’ll guard your heart.


You take to your notebook, your pen in hand,

Leaving your thoughts in the form of stanzas.

I wonder when I’ll finally understand, that

 

I

Am

You.

© Daniel H., Durham, NC

The author's comments:

Well, it’s open to interpretation... I picked the image to go with this because my wish hasn’t come true. 

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Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 3 2019 at 5:31 pm
Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
57 articles 22 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life: it goes on.&rdquo; <br /> ― Robert Frost

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Aww! Thanks! I’m really glad you love it. I always write something like it will be the last thing I ever write. I find that to be helpful when I struggle. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Malcolm_Chase PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 30 2019 at 11:46 am
Malcolm_Chase PLATINUM, Madison, South Dakota
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Not all those who wander are lost<br /> - J. R. R. Tolkien<br /> <br /> Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it<br /> - Confucius <br /> <br /> Believe you can and you're halfway there<br /> - Theodore Roosevelt <br /> <br /> Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend.<br /> - Albert Camus<br /> <br /> It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.<br /> - Aristotle<br /> <br /> Nothing is impossible, the word itself says 'I'm possible'!<br /> - Audrey Hepburn<br /> <br /> The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched - they must be felt with the heart.<br /> - Helen Keller

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It's interesting to interpret this, but maybe I'll try...well, someone broke your heart, and you're probably still trying to recover from that, and maybe you take out your sorrow and pain in the form of words a beautiful poetry like this. Beyond that it's hard to say....especially the final part. No matter what, I really love this, and like all of your work, it's amazing, Sophia.