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Human Heart MAG

May 23, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]


Gun Shot
The bang rings out
Like a pebble thrown in water
Ripples collide
Slamming eardrums
Blood explodes
A life is lost
The blood is red
The life is human
But the skin is brown
The time is slavery
Or yesterday
Or 500 years ago
The time doesn't matter
And the killer says
The blood doesn't matter
The life doesn't matter
The skin matters
Gun shot
The bang rings out
Like a pebble thrown in water
Ripples collide
Slamming eardrums
Blood explodes
A life is lost
The blood is red
The life is human
But the skin is white
And people care
That can be yesterday
Yesterday is gone
Tomorrow
When a gunshot rings
And ripples like
A pebble in a pond
It's time to ask
Not the skin
But the heart
And the life
And the humanity
But not
And the skin is brown
And the skin is white
And the skin is asian
And the skin is hispanic
But the human heart.


The author's comments:

i wrote this for the i matter contest, which i found under contests in ti.


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Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Oct. 5 2021 at 12:05 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

YEAHHHHHHHHHH!

on May. 29 2021 at 9:40 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

yeah, i read it, it reminded me of younger mes favorite book.(hey maybe that's why my writing is so messed up, when I was, what, 11, my favorite book was about a school shooting, casino, gang, and other such violence. in the end the main character is almost killed, and then the navy seal love interest almost goes rogue and very nearly murders the villain.)

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 27 2021 at 7:06 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

I have written a poem similar to this. It's called, "April 16th"

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 27 2021 at 7:05 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

This is very searing.