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June 30, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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zing!

the frying pan flew from her hand

ping!

it hit against the land

ring!

it came back like a boomerang

ow!

it hit her in the head with a bang.

© Karina W., Ringwood, NJ

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i wanted to write a funny poem. probably failed.

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SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jul. 14 2021 at 10:40 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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i didnt know at the time(:
Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jul. 14 2021 at 10:06 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

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You didn't fail. You got editor's choice, girl, for crying out loud.