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July 31, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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I love a furless giant

Tho she is irksome,

Stupid, and slow

And frankly oblivious

She is my world

And I, her shadow

and no truer love is there

© Janelle L., E. Palestine, OH

The author's comments:

the love between a girl and a cat(and a lot of food, treats, and time). No truer love is there.

i wrote this in my head while cuddling with my cat, onyx. shes a little shadow kitty. shes also in a permanent bad mood bc shes jealous of the new kitten, but she was being really sweet and friendly so I thought of this.

(the oblivious thing is on purpose. makes me laugh.) 

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SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Aug. 7 2021 at 10:34 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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thx!
onyx is so cute, even when shes grumbling passive aggressively. not so much when shes smacking a young kitten...
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2021 at 3:35 pm
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

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Wow, this sounds so much like a cat. I love it
Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Aug. 6 2021 at 2:38 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Beautiful:)
LKQgirl GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2021 at 2:31 pm
LKQgirl GOLD, Somonauk, Illinois
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MUH HAH HAH HAH!

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This poem even sounds like a cat!