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Whispers in the Wind

October 19, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Down by the water,
Down by the stream,
Sits a girl,
Trapped in repeat.
Once she feels,
Any hope,
It’s snatched away,
As quick as it showed.
She can never seem,
To get it right,
Mistakes follow her life.
Some say listen close,
And you’ll hear,
Her desperate plea,
But no one stops to see.


The author's comments:

This poem is about how we feel when were trapped in a ever lasting loop where we keep messing up everytime life is getting good. Please comment!


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on Nov. 11 2021 at 12:37 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks, like I said your a great person.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Nov. 11 2021 at 12:07 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
172 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

I'm sending virtual hugs.

on Nov. 11 2021 at 8:10 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Your fine, I'm already depressed don't know how it could get any worse.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Nov. 10 2021 at 10:18 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
172 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

I'm not trying to depress you even more...I'm just saying that the only way I know through fire is through fire. I know I will be free one day, even if I always have the smell of smoke around me to remind me. OK, now maybe I'm being depressing again...

on Nov. 7 2021 at 3:00 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
117 articles 1 photo 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

I'm sorry that you feel like that, I hate the feeling like I can't be good, like I can't change, it's hard to live like that and miserable.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Nov. 7 2021 at 9:28 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
172 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

The worst thing is looking back on your life. The next worse thing is telling yourself you'll be all different tomorrow when you follow through with your resolutions, but something stops you, and you just act like you did before.
Whatever happened in the past is healing slowly, so I must learn to take life slowly also. And I won't be able to totally defeat sorrow. But once I learn to accept that this is the way I feel, there is freedom in that thought, strangely enough.