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Glass Doll

November 4, 2021
By CautionOnceMore BRONZE, Centreville, Maryland
CautionOnceMore BRONZE, Centreville, Maryland
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Be gentle with me, lover,

I’ve been broken before

Though I’m now pieced together

mistreatment will shatter me

again I’ll become clear shards who

in the warm waters of your love

stealthily tear you apart.

 

Be strong for me, lover,

I’ve carried the weight of these broken pieces far

longer than you’ll know and if

I collapse and if

you can’t catch me these pieces will scatter and

carelessly you’ll sweep them away from

your soft, silky skin.

 

So I ask of you, lover,

before I fall

before I become hazardous

hold me close

find a warm place for me

once in your heart

then once in the ground.

 

And once I am, lover,

surrounded by life, I’ll

love you from afar

without causing you harm

 

while the soil embraces me

remember me fondly

Be sad for me, lover,

but when you love again, with whoever it is

Be gentle and

Be strong.


The author's comments:

Initially, what inspired me to write this was simply the phrase "be gentle with me". I heard someone say it, I don't even remember who, but it struck me as incredibly intimate. I really wanted to capture that tender, almost melancholy feeling the phrase gave off. With that tone in mind, I developed this story.


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on Nov. 5 2021 at 9:37 am
Bumble_Bee PLATINUM, New Athens, Illinois
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Wow! I really like how you turned a phrase into a story!!