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The crimson candle

April 14, 2022
By charlie_c17 BRONZE, Saint Louis, Missouri
charlie_c17 BRONZE, Saint Louis, Missouri
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a flame of gentian blue and fiery gold shines

dancing and flickering, like stars sparkling

and beneath, a crimson red candle lies

glowing like lava, full of warm wax melting

and on its sides wax like bitter tears down-slides

time ticks by and the candle is mournfully shortening

 

the flame that now wavers was once bright

a long life well lived slowly melts away

soon what is now light will turn back to night

the gray wick wears thin into a dying fray

the light quivers as it struggles with all its might

but it fades into cold darkness before the end of the day



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Afra ELITE said...
on May. 13 2022 at 9:43 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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