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Love Me So,

October 5, 2022
By CloTeo BRONZE, Wallingford, Connecticut
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Music, music, to my ears

Stop the crying, stop the tears

While I waste these youthful years

Love me so, or confirm my fears


A cloudy haze inside my mind

Bittersweetness over time

I can’t blame you, it’s by design

Love me so, it doesn’t have to rhyme


The music playing, heavy-rock

Blaring sounds, like nails on chalk

A dove of many has left its flock

Love me so, or love me not.


Oh music music, to my ears

Rip me up, expose my fears

The notes are bursting through blissful tears

I’ll keep crying until you appear

Photo by Nick Fewings on Unsplash

The author's comments:

This poem is about being in love with someone who doesn't love you back. The theme of music is used to present this topic

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Dechlan, this was fantastically written!!! I enjoyed reading this... Love your choice of words!!!