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Waiting for you

May 3, 2023
By karinagrace BRONZE, Cerritos, California
karinagrace BRONZE, Cerritos, California
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Selfless by the Strokes 


Waiting for You

I wasn’t sure how long I could wait for you,

This entire situation had me feeling very blue.

I sat there pondering over the last words you told me

Receiving a stinging feeling, knowing this would take great healing 

I tried to gather myself but I found myself unable to move

I just sat there and rethought the last words I said to you,


Please don’t be long, because I want your love  


My life was incomplete without you 

You had me wrapped around your delicate finger 

Why would you want me to linger? 

I found myself reliving our relationship,

Going over every detail, hoping to find my flaws

Wondering if I was the cause. 

Even though you said it wasn’t me, still I couldn't help but disagree

Why else would you do this to me?


Please don’t be long, because I want your love


It’s been a week and you haven’t called.

I prayed everything would soon be resolved

Suddenly I heard a knock, in shock that it was you

We stood in the doorway for a second, until you reached for me

I felt my heart begin to race, in disbelief that you were truly here 

Knowing  this meant you were going to come back to me.

 


Selfless by the Strokes

Waiting for You
I wasn’t sure how long I could wait for you,
This entire situation had me feeling very blue.
I sat there pondering over the last words you told me
Receiving a stinging feeling, knowing this would take great healing
I tried to gather myself but I found myself unable to move
I just sat there and rethought the last words I said to you,

Please don’t be long, because I want your love

My life was incomplete without you
You had me wrapped around your delicate finger
Why would you want me to linger?
I found myself reliving our relationship,
Going over every detail, hoping to find my flaws
Wondering if I was the cause.
Even though you said it wasn’t me, still I couldn't help but disagree
Why else would you do this to me?

Please don’t be long, because I want your love

It’s been a week and you haven’t called.
I prayed everything would soon be resolved
Suddenly I heard a knock, in shock that it was you
We stood in the doorway for a second, until you reached for me
I felt my heart begin to race, in disbelief that you were truly here
Knowing this meant you were going to come back to me.

Please don’t be long, because I want your love


The author's comments:

My poem is considered a BOP poem. Which uses the lyrics of the song Selfless by the Strokes.


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