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Adam's Little Haven

December 14, 2023
By momin_bari08 BRONZE, Dublin, Other
momin_bari08 BRONZE, Dublin, Other
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Trouble at home, trouble at school,

Bruises on his body, scars on his face,

A troubled boy he was, but he didn’t think this at all,

They all thought he was a hassle, little boy Adam,

Quiet and timid, frail and weak,

Breaking all the rules, a thrill that couldn’t compete,

Risks that weren’t worth taking, this was Adam’s little haven,

Trouble at home, trouble at school,

His father red with anger, releasing it all at once,

But deep down Adam knew, his father did love him once,

When life didn’t feel real, Oh! The way Adam used to feel!

When life was colourful, he used to feel wonderful,

But now it’s changed, Adam’s little haven doesn’t feel safe,

“His future is at risk!” His father would say,

But Adam didn’t care, he’d just continue his day,

Loud and weeping, regretful and sad,

Adam had lost everything, including his dad,

In the quiet graveyard, where memories are paved,

Adam found solace, his haven embraced,

Beside his dads grave, words gracefully wove,

“Dad, I’ve finally found my little haven, a place to grow.”


The author's comments:

I thought this was a good poem I made in English class a while ago. We had to improve one of our past pieces that we did in English class. I decided to do this one because I saw lots of potential in it. I felt it conveyed a lot of emotions and also had some good developement with the main character 'Adam'. after working on it for a few weeks, I showed it to my Mum and Dad. They were really proud of it and told me to make it more known. After showing it to my English teacher, he thought that it was very good, and told me to go to Teen Ink to submit it. I'm really happy with this and even though I'm young, I feel that it should get recognition so people can enjoy the poem and understand the story behind it. Thank you for giving me the oppurtunity to share this and I'm happy that this has the chance to be read by lots of people.


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