Outside Of My Window | Teen Ink

Outside Of My Window

December 22, 2023
By earthtoni BRONZE, Marrero, Louisiana
earthtoni BRONZE, Marrero, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
“the greatest pleasure is giving pleasure”


I love everybody because of your love 

Or lack thereof 


Watching you brush with death 

It’s as if you killed someone, body covered in pink blood that can’t be washed off 

Wrinkled hands reaching for the can once again 


The sun burns her aged skin 

More and more petals fall to the ground 

The floral smell becomes less fragrant 

And yet each day she awakes and tends to her world again 

I don’t think there's anybody more beautiful. 


The author's comments:

this piece was written for an art school application. The specific prompt was to write about something you see outside of your window each day, and so I chose to write about my mother taking care of a dying tree.


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.