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The Old Man

May 6, 2024
By joshcutts88 BRONZE, Clifton, Colorado
joshcutts88 BRONZE, Clifton, Colorado
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Don’t let the Old Man in

When he knocks it’s too late

To redeem a troubled sin

And seal my damned fate


Don’t let the Old Man in

To find a life too young

Take away a mother’s kin

Before their songs can be sung


Don’t let the Old Man in

My body, weathered and worn

My soul, torn and broken

Take me to when I was born


Don’t let the Old Man in

Life can be too long

Don’t take it on the chin

Write your precious song

And don’t let the Old Man in.


Inspired by the lyrics of Toby Keith’s ‘Don’t Let the Old Man In’


The author's comments:

This poem is meant to tell the story of not taking your life for granted. This poem is meant to inspire people to go live their lives and have it mean something before the inevitability of death catches up to them. The "Old Man" is meant to represent Death. This poem was inspired by the lyrics of the late songwriter and performer, Toby Keith, and his song 'Don't Let the Old Man In'.


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