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Vision of the Unknown

May 16, 2024
By carsonkrueger2007 BRONZE, Wentzville, Missouri
carsonkrueger2007 BRONZE, Wentzville, Missouri
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You can’t relax.

You relax, you die

He opens his eyes

To a shapeless body

And a

Abyss below

Uneasy and uncertain

Looks up at skeleton branches

Eyes and mind

Adjust to a flipped world

The ground

Whipped upside down

Over

A dead tree


The author's comments:

This was a random assignment that I did in my Creative Writing I class. I really liked how it turned out, so I decided to find a random writing competition to see how I would do.


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