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Realize

September 16, 2009
By Alice28 GOLD, Somewhere Over The Rainbow, Oregon
Alice28 GOLD, Somewhere Over The Rainbow, Oregon
13 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its hard to defeat someone...who never gives up.


Live for the one you love
Love for the one you live for
When death came a knocking I opened the door
At first I wondered what to do
Thought it over
Thought of you
Took the wrong path wish I could go back
But now I cant
What’s wrong with that?
The hands of death killed me inside
But yet I’m still here
Yet I’m still alive
Thoughts of you brought me through
Its not so bad because of you
I love you so
Please don’t go.
I lost you once; and didn’t let it show
Retraced my steps
Saw the light of the sky-the ocean was crashing
Tell me who am I?
Woke up screaming
Cant believe my eyes you were there
By the light of the sky


The author's comments:
What you give in a poem is one thing....what people get from it is another.

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on Nov. 15 2010 at 6:22 pm
1_am_wh0 BRONZE, Ojai, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two make four. If that is granted, all else follows. Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two make four. If that is granted, all else follows.&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -George Orwell

I'm speechless. This seems to be my experience with life enbodied in words. Thank you for commenting on my work, and keep writing.

on Sep. 22 2009 at 10:20 am
TheProcrastinator BRONZE, Dauphin Island, Alabama
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Very well written and orignal. I love it!!