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Let Me Shoot You

September 16, 2009
By Green_Eyed_Irish PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
Green_Eyed_Irish PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Come here, let me shoot you. Let me shoot you with a potion.
A potion that will Wash away this Film. This Film blinding the Truth.
The Truth, my love, which only few can see.
War is raging around us. A Spiritual War, with Angels and Demons. A fight, slaying the Wrong for what is Right.

This reality you see was formulated by the Devil. He makes you think that TV,
Internet,
Sex,
Drugs,
Money,
Work,
Is Life.
This is the reality he has created. This is a false reality.

Come here, let me shoot you. Let me shoot you with a potion.
A potion that will Wash away this Film. This Film surrounding the Truth.
And once this film has fallen, YOU can see the Truth!
God’s Reality. The Reality that is so simple you pass it right up.
“Too Easy” you say. “Not for Me” you think. “Keep Walking” you go.
And you pass it right up. You shut the gate that was once open to you.
Foolish child of the World. Don’t you see what you’ve done?

The reality you miss, is the most beautiful thing EVER. It’s God’s original plan.
He’s given us the
Grass,
Trees,
Flowers,
Wind,
Rain,
Snow,
Heat,
Cold,
Sun,
Moon,
Stars,
You,
Me,
Us.

US IN CREATION. Was God’s original plan. Simple lives, lived in simple beauty. Worshiping Him for Eternity.
Growing flowers, lying in the grass, eating apples, studying Him, building sand castles, writing stories, visiting friends, singing songs, creating music, taking walks, dancing in the rain, spinning in the snow, basking in the sun, living in REALITY.
The Reality hidden by the Film over your Eyes.

So come here, let me shoot you.



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on Sep. 23 2009 at 6:40 pm
Green_Eyed_Irish PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Hey guys, I am the author of this poem, and I just wanted to thank you all for your support! Your feedback means so much:) Thanks again <3

Rebecca321 said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 5:26 pm
:)

So true, all the simple things in life became beautiful to me when I looked at them the way God would.

on Sep. 23 2009 at 11:16 am
Emoprairedog BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
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i really liked this. its soo true and wonderful.

on Sep. 23 2009 at 9:49 am
TheProcrastinator BRONZE, Dauphin Island, Alabama
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Wonderful! Agrand poem. keep writing!

ivyonthewall said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 7:15 am
this rocks!! and it's so freakin true!

on Sep. 22 2009 at 2:47 pm
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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WOW oh my gosh this seriously is amazing, u hav talent

greg9381 GOLD said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 11:55 am
greg9381 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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wow. very powerful! I love this. I feel like the title was just a little misleading so it was certainly different, but its great!

on Sep. 21 2009 at 11:43 pm
Green_Eyed_Irish PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
31 articles 0 photos 17 comments
Wonderful! I'm sooo glad you like it.

on Sep. 21 2009 at 11:37 pm
a-head-full-of-words GOLD, Hollywood, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;He must increase, but I must decrease.&rdquo;- John 3:30

wow i <3 the message in this....im a Christian 2 & i totally believe al of tht! great job!!! keep it up!