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You And I

September 17, 2009
By XDevilsXLatinoX PLATINUM, Hamilton, New Jersey
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''How we survive is what wakes us who we are''

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Though I'm still broken in many places

Your like a room of unfamiliar faces

You bring out the best in me

Can you and I just flee

You have the smile of a saint

The outer glow of an Angel

We keep our goodbyes ever so faint

You just make me dangle

Your eyes sparkle like the moonlight sky off a lake

This is oh so not fake

Your hand in mine

Let me take you and we can dine

You fit so perfectly within me

I couldn't have asked for anything more anything better

Can this really be?

As I close this letter remember....

No one's perfect

But you and I feels ever so....

© Jami U., W. Hempstead, NY

The author's comments:
after taking me for ever to rebuild after a four year relationship of hell and heartache I was finally ready but IT wasnt ready for me so I stepped back and in she walked and I didnt have to lift a finger...
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