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Thirsty MAG

September 18, 2009
By Vinesdarkly BRONZE, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
Vinesdarkly BRONZE, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
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Bottle
falls from a stand
water inside writhing.

Confinement.

Slish-slosh
eddies and whirls!
Clear walls bend and crinkle.

Restriction.

Blockade –
immovable,
stands firm against assault.

Enclosure.

Quaking:
a hand skims it.
Its cap is twisted off.

Relinquish.

The author's comments:
Thought about how water feels confined in a bottle.

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