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Darkness

September 11, 2009
By evil_naiad PLATINUM, Afton, Virginia
evil_naiad PLATINUM, Afton, Virginia
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Darkness is master
The vast nothing awaits
Walk on through dreamland
While the all waking scream

Lights only cast shadows
This smile is fake
Run across star-paths
Back into the past

Blind to the sunlight
Your eyes drift to a close
Ruined memories vanish
Only darkness remains



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ninian SILVER said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:52 pm
ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
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man that was deep... i'm happy i'm not the only one that writes depressive stuff thanks

on Sep. 30 2009 at 9:27 pm
Your welcome:)

on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:54 pm
evil_naiad PLATINUM, Afton, Virginia
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thank you :)

on Sep. 29 2009 at 12:05 pm
I love this poem. It is very poetic. The way you used metaphors made me happy... even though the poem was supposed to be depressing. I felt your pain.