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Where'd You Go?

October 3, 2009
By KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;life isn&#039;t a matter of milestones, but of moments&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;be as you wish to seem.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;it&#039;s better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;


i woke to find your loving face,
smiling over me,
filled with grace.

but just as soon as i said hello,
you went away,
to where i dont know.

i sat straight up,
and looked around,
but everywhere i looked,
there was no one to be found.

i took out your picture,
and closed my eyes,
there you were again,
quiet and suprised.

i asked you why you werent still here,
you said dont worry,
"I'm spending some time with Jesus this year."


The author's comments:
i was completing a test to get into a specialized high school when this poem just came to me; most likely inspired by my Grandpa and Uncle. R.I.P. <3

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on Nov. 6 2009 at 9:07 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;life isn&#039;t a matter of milestones, but of moments&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;be as you wish to seem.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;it&#039;s better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;

oki doki, i will when i get back in school :)

on Nov. 6 2009 at 9:06 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;life isn&#039;t a matter of milestones, but of moments&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;be as you wish to seem.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;it&#039;s better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;

thankss.. i love geting feed back

on Nov. 6 2009 at 2:46 pm
nooxygen PLATINUM, Medford, New York
49 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
the mirror only tells half the story, beauty is found on the inside...<br /> love is blind<br /> only the shadow knows<br /> words said in the heat of anger are never from the heart

awsome =]

good job

on Nov. 5 2009 at 5:39 pm
I like this a lot. It almost made me cry. Please check out some of my work too :)

on Oct. 15 2009 at 9:14 am
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;life isn&#039;t a matter of milestones, but of moments&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;be as you wish to seem.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;it&#039;s better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not.&quot;

thanksss so muchhh

on Oct. 14 2009 at 2:08 pm
White_Shadow BRONZE, Putnam, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A life without cause is a life without effect.&quot; - Unknown

lovely. really :)