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October 22, 2009
By igotchucks92 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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"Do not fear death, but rather the unlived life."

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You make me laugh.
I make you run.
You give me space
I push you some.
You give me hope.
I give you pain.
You give me sun.
I give you rain.
I live
You die.
I say I lied.
You tell me goodbye.
I cry inside.
You turn and hide.

© Chelsea H., Gulfport, MS

The author's comments:
Well, this poem is about a relationship that makes you feel like you can't do anything right. One person seems to give everything, when the other gives nothing.
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