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first time i ever saw your face

October 30, 2009
By richardswifey SILVER, Lyndonville, New York
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richardswifey SILVER, Lyndonville, New York
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"it s better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all"

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when i first saw you,
my heart skipped a beat,
my head went dizzy,
and my stomach was fluttereing,
i didnt saw much even tho you did,
i felt like a giddy little kid,
that cold december night still, gves me chills,
that first kiss was like heaven in my hands,
its been a year now and you still havent gone,
but lookin back on that day os the best memory i have of us,
it was three months of being together,
without really meeting each other,
that first time i ever saw you still makes me smile

© Allison S., Eau Claire, WI

The author's comments:
the first time i ever saw my boyfrien of a year now was on december 29 2008 he lives with me now and is just all together great. the first time you see the love of your life it feels like everything has fallen into place
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richardswifey SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 10:24 am
richardswifey SILVER, Lyndonville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;it s better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all&quot;

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my new one is now posted check it out
TamaraN PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 2:04 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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thanks i will
richardswifey SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 11:06 am
richardswifey SILVER, Lyndonville, New York
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;it s better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all&quot;

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thanks, i just posted a new one chech it out sometime your work is really great...
TamaraN PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 13 2009 at 10:57 am
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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i really enjoy your poem and i know how u must have felt without him comment me some time