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Without you

October 30, 2009
By TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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I’m free as a bird
Without you now
I’m free as a bird
And it feels WOW


Now when I look
In your direction
I’m so glad
There’s no affection

It’s great knowing
There are no feelings there
And its wonderful feeling
Like I don’t have to care

Now that I’m happy
I know its true
I was always better off
When I wasn’t with you


The author's comments:
I hate this feeling and its not something i can just do poetry comes from all of my real life experiances

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on Nov. 23 2009 at 1:46 pm
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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omg yes thats what it was about

on Nov. 23 2009 at 11:02 am
richardswifey SILVER, Lyndonville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"it s better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all"

thats a good one. ive had that feeling with an abusive ex of mine