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November 15, 2009
By livelaughlovemylife BRONZE, Niles, Ohio
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idk.! i dont really have one.!

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I remembered the blue ocean,
the rain fell around me,

i remembered each drop,
so tiny, so unique,

the it hit me as if a bat hit a ball,
i felt part of the world,

i felt everything great,
love, beauty, brains, happiness,

everything tied into one,
but then i realized i wasnt looking at the world around me
i was looking into the eyes of the one i loved

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

The author's comments:
i think im too young for love but when i first looked into the eyes of my first love this was how i felt.! <3
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