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Never Heard
November 20, 2009
Written Words
flow freely through
me-
they are
me
I am
blessed-
i can create.
i am
cursed-
my words are
read, never
heard...
© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA
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This article has 17 comments.
christin.bass SILVER said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 3:28 pm
this has a beautiful flow, i can relate also. it has a solid stand point i love it. great job
JamieRose[= said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 2:29 pm
I write, not to be heard, but to express, to inspire, and to create. These words are yours, and they hold value, but why does that value dwindle if they are only heard by you? They should be carried in the same light, no matter the number of viewers, because poetry isn't supposed to be proud, it's supposed to be intimate, and a reflection of self, and life. Reflect on why you write, and yourself, not who is reading.
i_am_nobody SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:55 pm
those r to completely different lines! you cant go on about that! this is freeform. for one situation, people can write how they feel it. so why does it matter if the word me is used twice in the same stanza?
WaterQueen07 GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:49 pm
Wow I love this poem AND all the comments! I feel like I'm not alone.
nature-elf PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:47 pm
Yes, it repeats the "me" part. "Written words/flow freely through/ME-/they are/me.
i_am_nobody SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:28 pm
no it doesnt
nature-elf PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:22 pm
Loved it, except for the repeat "they are ME"--that part says "me" twice.
dancer4729 said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 12:25 pm
I can totally relate to that. Great job at writing. I love the simplicity of it. Great Job!
closed-in said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 10:27 am
i feel like that feels like everyday to be honest cause it seems loke nobody eles will listen but just my friends but sometimes they dont even listen <,>
punksk8rgurll said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:53 pm
Loved it. That's how I feel about most of my writing.
CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 3:51 pm
Pretty good, it's a great way to get out feelings isn't it?
shininglife2273 SILVER said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:59 pm
love how simple it is! Good job! (:
princess alicia said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 6:24 pm
this poem is wonderful i speak the same way.
BlueAstronaut PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:56 pm
radical :]
i like the simplicity.
have you ever thought of writing structured poetry?
i think you'd be good at it
i like the simplicity.
have you ever thought of writing structured poetry?
i think you'd be good at it