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Broken Wings

November 24, 2009
By blackrose326 GOLD, Burlington, North Carolina
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blackrose326 GOLD, Burlington, North Carolina
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If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost then who am I? Anonymous<br /> Beauty can not be found in worldy views for these are; corrupted veiws straight form the gates of hell - Anonymous

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Im an angel with broken wings
Waiting for someone to patch me back up
Hard to believe the way I've been living is so deadly
Waiting to kill; slowely and silently
Like a snake stalking it's prey
A shadow that will never go away
Just waiting for the right time to strike
The darkest time of the night
When there's no light &
you think you can't win your fight
But it's still to hard to give up
Since I've come so far
I have people that I know I can trust
But it might not be enough

© Arenda R., Palo Verde, AZ

The author's comments:
A dream I had inspired me to write this poem. I hope that the readers get that No matter what your going through & if you just want to give up keep going. Cause in the long run you'll end up stronger than ever.
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blackrose326 GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 3:53 pm
blackrose326 GOLD, Burlington, North Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost then who am I? Anonymous<br /> Beauty can not be found in worldy views for these are; corrupted veiws straight form the gates of hell - Anonymous

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thnxs it was that good?
doggy1105 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:57 pm
doggy1105 BRONZE, Canton, Michigan
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wow im in shok amazing
blackrose326 GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 4:58 pm
blackrose326 GOLD, Burlington, North Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost then who am I? Anonymous<br /> Beauty can not be found in worldy views for these are; corrupted veiws straight form the gates of hell - Anonymous

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It is? I was really depressed when I wrote it. Oh well at least you like it. =))))))))
sistafreak said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 12:39 pm
This one is very inspirational! like it very much!! keep up the good work :)