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Ode to Silence

January 19, 2010
By Drown_Me_In_Blue DIAMOND, Brooklyn, New York
Drown_Me_In_Blue DIAMOND, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Labels? Okay, fine. I'm bisensual. Heteroflexible. And life-curious. That about covers it. ~Morgan Torva


In the calm, only one raindrop has fallen,
And surges in spreading ripples
At the bottom of the well.
This freezing wind that rocks
The wind-tossed forest of my heart
Is only stilled by silence.

A black-and-white picture of the sky
Filled with your mute strength;
Silent snowfall,
Perfect in the darkness,
White breath clouding without sound:
In a world made of noise,
Half-drowned in pandemonium,
You are my sanctuary.

With your tranquility,
Please bring back that peaceful time,
To my wind-tossed heart
We are sinking in the sea of sound,
The silence born of noise.

Sweet serenity, the stillness of the mind
But not the cessation of thought,
Stepping on the shadow
Of crimson chaos;
In this race for higher ground,
Fighting the passage of time,
You hold the key to our peace of heart.

By your hand,
The tapestry of noise is unraveled;
This knot of garish strings,
Connecting every person
With six degrees of separation.
Unwoven, undone,
We fall apart in perfect silence,
Though the tranquil, solitary sky
Connects all the pieces of this world.

Prayers of light, carried on noiselessness—
Shatter, darkened horizon, and let the night’s calm
Fill the land once more.
Silence, like a stark reverie
Against the backdrop this frenzied world,
You hold every color of my dreams.

Humans cannot exist alone,
But our noise
Will bring pain until end.
Not speaking, we see so much more
Of light,
Of darkness.
Bear up the world on your shoulders, silence,
And return us all to our mirror-tinted innocence.

The darkness holds the silence of the world,
For light is garish, rejecting quiet,
And filled with the quicksilver emptiness
That is life.
Hold up your transparent, wraithlike hands
To shield us from the raucous sound of rain.

Pass beyond the need for sound,
Where your voice is frozen in your throat,
As though some phantom hand
Has choked it off,
And every breath trembles
With the longing for sound.

Silence is much kinder
Than the grating rush of noise
That floods our senses in this base world.
Silence, you carry in your stillness
The perfection of eternity.


The author's comments:
I like people, but I also like to be alone, without any noise or worries, and just enjoy the silence.

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blah247 said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:33 am
very good and descriptive

v-ballstar01 said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:33 am
this was a very good piece... great job!

dimond523 said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:31 am
I like how Ode to Silence has a calme tranquil theme but also a dark mysterious side, it was very interesting.

gotmilkmoose said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:31 am
All I can say is amazing peom, with great word selection. I was very moved by it and it made me think of silence in a new light.

on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:30 am
This is a very detailed ode to silence that makes you really think how golden silence can be. I never really thought about silence being depicted this way.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 9:01 am
liknorris BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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that was very good the word selection and the choose the poem

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:54 am
CHEERLEADER~4~life BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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good job.....you are a very good wrighter

:)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:53 am
Logan Stoltzfus, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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wow great and moving poem great job!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:53 am
Aislinnnnn:) GOLD, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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People are always saying that silence is horrible, when its really not. i trust that you would know that with your wonderful poem ABOUT silence. ha,ha. :)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:52 am
Rock_Lobster BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Wind <br /> The wind blows my hair and blows mind <br /> The wind so soft so fluffy takes its time<br /> It touchs the the grass so smooth and fine <br /> The wind pushes it self through everything <br /> To keep this wind going strong <br /> You must sing a beatuiful song <br /> The wind blows my hair and my mind <br /> You can feel the beatiful wind even if you`r blind

Sometimes i am so hooked up in what i am doing i forget how valueble scilence really is. you reminded me of how important scilence. you really gave the meaning to scilence good job and keep on writeing!!

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on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:51 am
alisha14 BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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sometimes i love the silence but most of the time i love being loud. this article made me realize how valuable silence is. keep up the good work =)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:51 am
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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i liked this piece of writing. it makes sence on how people feel and great job on writing it. keep it up.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:50 am
screamingeagle SILVER, Athlen, Pennsylvania
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after reading this it makes silence a good thing

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:48 am
HaxoRReiGn BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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this is a very good piece keep up the great work :)!!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:48 am
SteelersAllDay23 SILVER, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I can have you dreaming when you not even sleeping.

This was very well written. It brought like a taste of sense to me with its details

Katlyn BRONZE said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:47 am
Katlyn BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game &quot;

I enjoyed this poem. It makes you think that even when everything is rushing around and complicated when your alone everything's just fine && maybe the words we hear and say are the reason for a lot of the problems we have. Pretty amazing poem (:

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:47 am
Faith-Morgan BRONZE, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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your poem is different form all the others it makes you want to cherish silence!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:46 am
himynamesryanwhatsyours? SILVER, Christiana, Pennsylvania
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this was very...neat...good job...

on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:45 am
volley_spike_jumpserver SILVER, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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wow silence is very valuble but sometimes it scary instead of peaceful

Z-Saber said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:32 am
Z-Saber, Parksburge, Pennsylvania
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This reminds me how valuble silence is