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Confusion

January 27, 2010
By jacalexz BRONZE, Everett, Washington
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Time is suspended,
Just for a second.
Colors swirl,
We forget to hold each other, mesmerized.
Our bodies twirl,
Spinning around.
We’re ripped apart,
Torn.
Trying to hold on,
Wanting to feel your touch.
Reaching, grasping,
Wanting you here.
I catch a glance of you,
You’re so calm.
Do you love me the way I love you?

© Monica L., St. George, UT

The author's comments:
this piece is inspired by a strange relationship I was in. it's a weird feeling when you realize your more in love than the other person.
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