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The First Four Lines

January 27, 2010
By 20Autumn14 GOLD, Ely, Nevada
20Autumn14 GOLD, Ely, Nevada
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Can I say the first four lines?
No I can't it gives my butterflies.
Because I have no time.

The first four lines?
Do they need to have a rhyme.
Or do they.

They say a lot maybe about
me and you but, for now let's
leave it about the two blue
things, US!

Let's ride the bus to save us
time. so we can go and dance on
on a line. Maybe the first four
lines.

The first four lines are passing
the time.

They are here then they are
there.

The First Four Lines


The author's comments:
i wrote this article when i was asked out by a senior but i said no

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on Feb. 9 2010 at 11:27 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx