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January 29, 2010
By bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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The truth is
I need you
The truth is
I love you
The truth is
I don't want to lose you
I cant lose you
I want your love
I crave it
But i cant admit it
Because then everyone would know
My secret.
Shhhhh, they dont know.
Its just my secret.
A terrible secret of my own.

© Ellen K., Baldwin Park, CA

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ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 11:38 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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You're Welcome :)
bilbogirl GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 8:35 am
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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okay, thank you so much for your feedback. Now i know what i need to work on! thanks again :)
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:22 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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This was okay...I think if you refrain "the truth is" at the beginning of the poem, you should continue to refrain til the end. unless you could make a powerful transition without losing the meaning.