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January 31, 2010
By xoacashaxo PLATINUM, Danvers, Massachusetts
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xoacashaxo PLATINUM, Danvers, Massachusetts
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The absense of him is everywhere,I have overwhelming flashbacks everywhere I go. The stupid holidays that remind me of you:father's day and the stupid valentines day father daughter dance. You,you're everywhere and nowhere at all.Everytime I see a reflection of myself I see parts you:my eyes,my mouth,my nose,my face expressions,it's all you. The absense of you is everywhere. Your face is everywhere I look and then nowhere at all. I'm acheing and breaking and daddy I need you,but I dont really want you untill you're better! The absense of you is putting me through burning agony. Daddy the absense of you is everywhere!!!!!!!

© Katherine A., San Antonio, TX

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xoacashaxo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 2:26 pm
xoacashaxo PLATINUM, Danvers, Massachusetts
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thanks I like my poems to be relatable and to have someone who understands me makes it easier
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on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:32 pm
CupCake023 BRONZE, Georgetown, Pennsylvania
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i really like this and can relate kinda, my real dad left me and i see him everywhere and think of him all the time and it kills me that he's not in my life and i wish he was but i don't want him in my life until he's done with the drugs and booze.... i really like this A LOT