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Unfamiliar

January 31, 2010
By CosmicLove GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
CosmicLove GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
12 articles 5 photos 26 comments

Caged
Enclosed
Desperate to break out.
Break free.
Slip into a new skin
Its strangely familiar
It's warm
It's alive.
Heartbeat
It falters.
It threatens to give in
It falls out of rythm.
Breath.
Frosted in the night air
Shallow
Barely there
Take in another
Good. Let it out.
Not so good.
Hold it
Don't breathe
Don't speak
Don't feel.


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on Feb. 18 2012 at 12:08 pm
CosmicLove GOLD, Lincoln, Illinois
12 articles 5 photos 26 comments
Thank you! :)

Anabela SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 9:18 am
Anabela SILVER, Forest Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Be careful the words you speak,<br /> make them soft and sweet;<br /> You never know from day to day,<br /> which ones you&#039;ll have to eat;

I really like the way you write, make you really imagine whats happening. Great job