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In the rain

February 13, 2010
By izziehorse GOLD, Vancouver, Other
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izziehorse GOLD, Vancouver, Other
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"A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse!"-Richard III

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Rain.
Falls down.
On me.
Hits my bare skin.
Refreshes my tired body.
My nerves are alive.
My senses are hightened.
I turn.
Slowly.
Breathing deeply.
Clean, cold air.
My head is tilted back.
Moisture running down my throat.
Purifying me.
Rushing through my veins.
A tingling sensation.
Suddenly.
It stops.
And all I feel is wet, cold water.
Running over my bare skin.
Soaking through thin clothes.
I shiver.
Walk slowly forward.
Towards shelter.
Safety.
Warmth.

© Alyssa J., Gibsonia, PA

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I love the rain. It can mean so many different things.
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This article has 6 comments.

izziehorse GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:22 pm
izziehorse GOLD, Vancouver, Other
12 articles 3 photos 6 comments

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"A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse!"-Richard III

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Awwwwwwwwww thx Sarah
awesomeSarahPoetPerson PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 8:42 pm
awesomeSarahPoetPerson PLATINUM, Richmond, Other
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The greatest pain that comes from love is loving someone you can never have.&rdquo;<br /> ~Anonymous

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Finally they post our poems. I read it before but i still love it
izziehorse GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 3:16 pm
izziehorse GOLD, Vancouver, Other
12 articles 3 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse!&quot;-Richard III

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Thx Robyn =)
Robyn said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 2:40 pm
NICE IZZ. I rated :)
izziehorse GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 4:04 pm
izziehorse GOLD, Vancouver, Other
12 articles 3 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse!&quot;-Richard III

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Thank you =)
simka09 said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 6:58 pm
this poem is beutifull

love it keep writing :)