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A Great Savior

February 12, 2010
By SarahJean GOLD, Heber City, Utah
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SarahJean GOLD, Heber City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone's filled with art, so express yourself." - Sarah Marcy

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A lonely tear
slipped out
from fear;
and strong doubt.

She feels no worth
to the grounds
of her earth
and what she surrounds.

She wants to know
why she's here
but although
had someone appeared.

Their love's a beautiful art.
He showed her love
and worth from the start,
when he stole her heart.

He wiped the tears,
held her close;
her vision becomes clear
wishing time would've froze.

The author's comments:
I used to get dumped and hurt by so many guys, even on Valentines Day once. Finally, I met someone who changed my life. He's my best friend, and he has showen me happiness. Everyone has a special someone, and it's truely amazing.
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