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So that's it.....

February 10, 2010
By abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
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you walked into my world only to trample on my heart...so that's it.

you completed my dreams so that you could rip them apart....so that's it...

i gave all that was left of my dieing love and you let it drift away like a migrating dove...so that's it.

sacrifices were made for your touch and kiss...hopes were forgotten for nothin but bliss....so that's it.

you gave my blinded eyes vision, my cursed faith religion and in the end you just caged my soul like a captured pigeon....so that's it.

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PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 6:40 pm
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
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my favorite line from this was "i gave all that was left of my dieing love and you let it drift away like a migrating dove...so that's it" and again i love your style  and this poem was filled with so much emotion and i love how it was so relatable!! great job!!!
JeanGrey GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:05 pm
JeanGrey GOLD, Mason City, Iowa
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I like this. It reminds me of your other poem "It hurts". Good work.