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March 4, 2010
By PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

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You lean in.
I pull you near.
We can join together.
Your lips touch mine.
We're in a daze...
gazing...
Our eyes meet.
There is no seperacy.
Your sweet taste.
I can tell you love me.
There is no release.
I LOVE YOU.
You can see.
We're in our world.
Obnly you and me.
You kiss me,
And sparks fly.
You kiss me,
And all is alive.
I let go,
And so do you...
We swap "I love yous"
And we go.
Trapped inside that moment...

FOREVER!!!

© Lauren G., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this on September 5, 2007. I was young, and love inspired, but this is honestly one of the best ones I have ever written!!
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MRose911 GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 2:09 am
MRose911 GOLD, Paradise, Utah
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I love this! :) So cute! :) Check out my work?
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:35 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow this is really good discription and really well written!!! i love this so oooo much-really really great job!!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!!
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2010 at 10:44 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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thanks.... at the end, it's sposed to be "I kiss you,  And all is alive"
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 11:09 am
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this is really cute and i feel like i was there. great imagery! check out my work too:-)