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Cold Wind

March 9, 2010
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I'm freezing with this cold wind
Blows through and surrounds me
With emptiness after I have sinned
And cold is what I have come to be

This sadness has gotten me scared
I thought what I was doing was right
Because to hurt you I wouldn't dare
But to fall in love I thought I might

I didn't know that this would happen
This has gone further than intended
Your doubts of what may have been
Broke my heart and you can't mend it

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sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 1:20 pm
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I think the rhyming structure is a little stiff and forced, but I enjoyed the premise behind the poem.