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March 11, 2010
By KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM, Heyworth, Illinois
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KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM, Heyworth, Illinois
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From me: &quot;The Point of writing isn&#039;t so others can understand what&#039;s going on in your mind. It&#039;s so you can understand what&#039;s going on inside yourself.&quot;<br /> <br /> By me: &quot;Who needs you when I have these yellow lines on this road?&quot;

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As I walked down a street,
I noticed a girl,
Her hair was blonde,
With the slightest curl,

She seemed to be lost,
Looking around,
She seemed to be scared,
With no hope of being found,

She twisted and twirled,
She turned and she spun,
She looked around, bewildered,
Looking for someone,

I walked down that street,
Up to that girl,
Whose hair was blonde,
With the slightest curl,

I picked her up,
Carried her home,
Adopted her,
And became her mom.

© April P., Newark, DE

The author's comments:
When I was little, my parents got a divorce and they both remairried. My step mother, Carrie, adopted me when I was eleven. If it werent for her, I dont know what I would do.
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2010 at 10:15 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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ahah ur welcome !!
KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 2:46 pm
KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM, Heyworth, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
From me: &quot;The Point of writing isn&#039;t so others can understand what&#039;s going on in your mind. It&#039;s so you can understand what&#039;s going on inside yourself.&quot;<br /> <br /> By me: &quot;Who needs you when I have these yellow lines on this road?&quot;

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Uhm... well... wow. thanks. You're definitely a writer because even in your comment you used a lot of words!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:19 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Wow this rhythm and rhyming is fantastic!!! i love this poem!! awesome job-it has a really good flow!! and i love how you wrote this from a different person's point of view!! just really really good job!! please check out some of my wok when you get the chance!! i think you might like 'words unspoken' or 'stay for tomorrow' :) it would mean alot if you checked it out!