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I looked for a star *

March 18, 2010
By starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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I looked for a star….
That is as beautiful as you are
I searched all day and searched all night
To find that light that shines so bright
You twinkle no matter how dark times get
And you tell me to never fret
You’re always there to shine down on me
And to surround me with your delicacy
I wish upon you all the time
For that is why I wrote this rhyme
I miss you when I can’t see you
You can’t imagine the pain I go through
So I looked for a star
As beautiful as you are
But I never found one…….

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Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars*-Les Brown
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starlight26 GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 4:33 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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Thanks so much !
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 8:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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this is great -i love it!!!
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 4:29 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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Thanks soo much everybody :)
Starrlyt PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 12:11 pm
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
20 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars -Les Brown

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I love it...keep on writing..and it seems our names are matching a lil bit. lol. Except everyone mispronounces mine. It's not pronounced star light. it's pronounced star lit. lol.  I wanna name my daughter, assuming i ever have one, starrlyt mck. :) either way, great poem.
heena222 said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:41 pm
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!UR SUCH A GREAT WRITER!!!!!!!!!!:):):)
Daha123 said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:53 pm
This was a great poem and I would  like to see more written from this author.
Inaya1 said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:39 pm
I thought this was a very moving poem.  It feels like it came straight from the heart. Just FAbulous! I want more from this author!