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March 23, 2010
By JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
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JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Before you, my life was like a moonless night. very dark. but there were stars-- points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteor. suddenly everything was on fire. there was brilliancy, there was beauty. when you were gone, the meteor had fallen over the horizon. everything went black. nothing had changed. but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn't see stars anymore."

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Thunder & Lightning
light up the sky,
It's like my heart;
Warm and Bright.
You lit it up.
Thunder booms,
like the pain I feel
when we're apart.
You complete me.
The rain falls
like I'm falling for you;
Silently, Swiftly, and Gently.
But then it pours,
like how I'm pouring
my heart out to you.
Our love is like a storm;
Exciting, Bright, and Dangerous.
I love storms,
Like I love you.

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

The author's comments:
Our English teacher told us to write a poem about spring, and spring reminds me of storms... So this is what I came up with.
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JordanTaylaa GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:08 pm
JordanTaylaa GOLD, Stephens City, Virginia
12 articles 13 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before you, my life was like a moonless night. very dark. but there were stars-- points of light and reason. and then you shot across my sky like a meteor. suddenly everything was on fire. there was brilliancy, there was beauty. when you were gone, the meteor had fallen over the horizon. everything went black. nothing had changed. but my eyes were blinded by the light. I couldn't see stars anymore."

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Thank you so much! :)
munkyman95 GOLD said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 5:15 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

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this is really good..you can feel the emotion