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Hell, Why Don’t I Write Another Verse About God?

March 28, 2010
By babyrae BRONZE, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are trapped in history and history is trapped in them. &quot;<br /> -James A. Baldwin <br /> <br /> &quot;The world owes you nothing. It was here first.&quot; <br /> -Mark Twain

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Oh my God.
Oops, I mean our God.
Wait, no- your God.

Well, who really knows who he belongs to?
All I know is that it’s certainly not me.
Ha, if I wanted to go to Heaven,
No, I couldn’t, wouldn’t, shouldn’t get in free.

The author's comments:
a bit sarcastic, just the way I like it.
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kristalynnbaron BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 2:03 pm
kristalynnbaron BRONZE, Oakland, New Jersey
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<333333 love it. very sarcastic, very real
Ramzan SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 5:02 pm
Ramzan SILVER, Loveland, Ohio
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I really liked the first section. Very cynical. Good job and keep writing!