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To The Loverless Lovers

April 12, 2010
By LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
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Roses are red,
Red like the streams,
Red like the blood which
Drips from His dreams.

And Violets are blue.
Blue as her fairy faye tears,
Blue as Her mother,
who longs for her mothers years.

Sugar is sweet,
as sweet as the lies
which pour from Our
Souls.

And so are You.
You, the brokenly beautiful,
the beautifuly broken.
And so are you.



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on Aug. 30 2010 at 8:14 pm
LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
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thanks a lot! Im really glad you think so =)

on Aug. 28 2010 at 11:43 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

i love the way you took the whole "roses are red" saying and made it totally original. it takes a true author to do that!

rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing(: