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Missing the Mark

April 12, 2010
By LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
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She tumbles through this field so golden,
Made of midnights and sunsets
And of teardrops stolen.
Yet instead of grasping beauty
In the eye of the storm,
She's entangled and ripped in this
Garden of thorns.



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on Aug. 30 2010 at 8:16 pm
LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
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thanks for reviewing my work! I really appreciate your input =)

on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:16 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

you're a GREAT writer. great job on this!!