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"Boyfriend"

May 13, 2010
By KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which<br /> procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt<br /> i&#039;m F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]


He gave me a love note
He held my hand
He gave me my first
Kiss in the sand
He brings out my best
He makes me shine
He's the best guy there is
And he's mine all mine
He loves me like
No one else does
He knows who I am
Doesn't matter who i was
Yes, he's my boyfriend
He lives in my mind
Yes, he's imaginary
'cus real ones are hard to find

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on Oct. 24 2010 at 10:26 am
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which<br /> procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt<br /> i&#039;m F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

hey thanks for posting-and i tried to look at ur work but it wudnt show up when i clicked on u :((

on Sep. 20 2010 at 2:23 pm
singergurl12 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
15 articles 0 photos 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales are true, not because they tell us dragons exist, but because they tell us dragons can be beaten.

haha SO FREAKIN TRUE! love this- completely dive-bombing prince charming while still realising the lil nudge that each girl feels in her heart when she sees this weeks "The One". great work!

on Jul. 25 2010 at 2:43 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

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&quot;I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, &#039;I have always thought that but never found the words for it.&#039;&quot; -anonymous

Haha. I love the ending, really cute and sweet and so dang true!!! I liked the tempo to your rhyming, really made it easy to read. Good job. If you could check out my work sometime I would really appreciate it.

on Jul. 20 2010 at 1:57 pm
writer62 SILVER, Springfield, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; in order to be the best you have to play the best, in order to play the best you must practice the best, in order to practice the best you must practice the most. Practice is the key to being the best!&quot;

This is great! Wow great job :)

 

 

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inspir3d GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 4:24 pm
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We&#039;re all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We&#039;re all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

Excellent. I can really identify with this!! Keep it up!! :)

on Jun. 17 2010 at 12:39 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream&quot;

this was really good.  like i can see that girls would feel this way and that the perfect person is always so hard to find