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Invisible Eye

May 21, 2010
By respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
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respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
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There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn <br /> Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.<br /> Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I&#039;ll give you a call~respecturself7

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I feel the eyes of unseen faces
Locked in a perpetual gaze with my
Soul.
There's no escaping the Prying eyes Of unwanted observers.
I get so Lost in the fear that I Might break Apart.
Beneath the searing gaze I Slip Into a state of terror,
Running from invisible eyes.

© Susannah B., Greenwich, CT

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Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 10:32 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
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To be so short it says a lot. Not at all my style although sometimes that can be my intention. It's talented poems like this that show how talented a poet you are. Being able to get so much meaning across to your readers without saying very much at all
sky_is_womb BRONZE said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 6:47 pm
sky_is_womb BRONZE, Moorestown, New Jersey
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All the soarings of my mind begin within my blood- Rilke

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gave me the chills
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 8:43 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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omgg i totally relate. i think u said it better than I wouldve if i wrote something bout it. :)) good job!! the word choice was exxcellente
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:55 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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i dont think this is creepy i think its emotional an beautiful, u word ure words beautifully!!!

ps: if u hav a sec plz check my stuff out

littlelilith SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 2:13 pm
littlelilith SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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This poem is very creepy. I loved it! WAY better than something I could write. Keep it up, 'kay?
respecturself7 SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:15 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
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There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn <br /> Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.<br /> Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I&#039;ll give you a call~respecturself7

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Thanks guys, I really appreciate the feedback. Hope you'll continue to check out my stuff when I get more posted.:)
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 1:35 am
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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This is very. cool. Strange, yes, but you created a greate mood and told a powerful story with such few words. great job. :)
ILikePersonificaition said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:33 am
ILikePersonificaition, River Hills, Wisconsin
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this is really quite creepy (in a fantastic way). you very much nailed the tone you were going for, and your word choice is great too! nice job!