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is that my heart or fireworks?

July 6, 2010
By ellebelly SILVER, Keller, Texas
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ellebelly SILVER, Keller, Texas
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as i look into the sky
and see sparks everywhere
it reminded me of a feeling
i would just like to share

as the fireworks explode
and the sparks fly apart
it has many similarities
to my exploding heart

that's what my heart looks like
everytime you are talking to me
i never knew what it looked like
but now i can clearly see

as it bursts and booms
and brings smiles to faces
is exactly wha i feel like
and my heart beat races

so thats what its like
its what i feel about you
my heart is like fireworks
i hope you can feel it too

© Kevan B., Beaverton, OR

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this is for a very special friend of mine...:)
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Collin13 SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 12:12 pm
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
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short, sweet, and straight to the point! very cute:)
Marlyre PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:14 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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the 2nd quatraine sealed the deal for me... great connection! read some of mine?
aLine1417 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 3:38 pm
aLine1417 PLATINUM, Nogales, Arizona
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i simply loved it(: that's how i feel about someone right now. check out some of my stuff whenever you can please!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:08 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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This is so creative!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!