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Raspberries

July 24, 2010
By Uglification GOLD, Catonsville, Maryland
Uglification GOLD, Catonsville, Maryland
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I want to learn to drive a stick shift, and go so far away that I stop being afraid of not wanting to come back or not being able to find my way back.


Rubbing the small blemish on the very tip
of her nose with hands dyed green by
those new Shrek fruit roll-ups, she sings
through pomegranate lips decorated
with small shards of sour cherry
flavoured Tootsie-pops, skips with thin,
pale legs, naked save for pink Hello
Kitty underwear, teases the new
dog who speaks through wrinkled
black lips under floppy Oreo McFlurry
ears; he knocks her over, her blonde
translucent hair sliding behind
her shoulders and a slobber-generous
kiss is planted on her cheek.



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on Aug. 13 2010 at 8:27 pm
Uglification GOLD, Catonsville, Maryland
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I want to learn to drive a stick shift, and go so far away that I stop being afraid of not wanting to come back or not being able to find my way back.

Thank you. :D

on Aug. 13 2010 at 8:05 pm
PaolaC. PLATINUM, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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I can really picture this in my head with your descriptions. I really like it :)

on Aug. 13 2010 at 4:45 pm
Uglification GOLD, Catonsville, Maryland
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I want to learn to drive a stick shift, and go so far away that I stop being afraid of not wanting to come back or not being able to find my way back.

Thank you!

on Aug. 12 2010 at 5:21 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

It made me so happy to read this! I can honestly say that you have one of the most unique writing styles that I have ever read on this website. I loved this poem, so good job.