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You said you'd always be there, but now you're gone

July 14, 2010
By ChelzH SILVER, Ranson, West Virginia
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ChelzH SILVER, Ranson, West Virginia
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"What is interesting about people is not their ability to do anything, but their perspective on everything and how the nuances of those perspectives correlate between people in similar and completely different situations." - K.H.

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How did things fall apart so fast?
One second we had a blast
The next you said it would never last
Is this really all falling apart?
I hadn't realized it yet, but you were gone.
Oh, how bad it felt.
Maybe it wasn't all that fast

© Gianna V., Sewell, NJ

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It's time for letting go.
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