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Untitled (In Your Favor) MAG

By Anonymous

I only wanted one thing,
a simple five-letter word,

title.

I’m sick of being just a friend.

To you the title was
pointless and unnecessary.
But to me it meant

everything.

Time has passed,
and nothing has changed.

Untitled

Is how we remain.



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on Feb. 19 2009 at 1:20 am
SaveThEmpty SILVER, Rathbun, Iowa
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simply put..i love it!

crich897 said...
on Jan. 7 2009 at 1:01 am
Hahaha WOW! is all i can say about this piece. It's actually very good. You described a simple (yet sometimes emotionally taxing) situation beautifully.

I would assume that you are talking about a lover in this piece? If so, I think you caught how alot of people feel quite often. I, myself, was in a "no-title 'relationship'" for a long time.

Couldn't have said it better myself. Great, great job.

babygirl1011 said...
on Dec. 1 2008 at 4:47 pm
this is really good. i can totally understand where your coming from. ive been in that situation myself.

oreo100507 said...
on Nov. 25 2008 at 6:33 pm
i am in this as well and can relate to you to i think its interesting your in des moines too and hope your luck is better

on Oct. 31 2008 at 3:15 am
i'm in this situation also.

darkmoon said...
on Oct. 15 2008 at 9:54 pm
i wow i cant even begin to describe it i loved it!!!

sammiey said...
on Oct. 15 2008 at 12:51 am
this is great it really get's me cuz i'm in this situation rite now

halfemoonie said...
on Oct. 12 2008 at 3:32 am
Hmm... this is quite interesting. I like it; nice work.

Tweedle Dee said...
on Oct. 11 2008 at 8:02 pm
oh my gosh that was great!

Juliana90 said...
on Aug. 27 2008 at 11:37 pm
This is great!!! It really hits home with me right now!!!

whitefloods said...
on Aug. 24 2008 at 3:13 am
this was AMAZING wow it took me a minute 2 get it at 1st but when i did WOW. u should really keep writing

IDKanymore said...
on Aug. 8 2008 at 5:26 pm
OMG that is so beautiful and it ment so much to me!!!

keesha said...
on Aug. 6 2008 at 9:54 pm
i lyk this poem alot