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Falling apart

October 8, 2010
By rosamund BRONZE, Devon, Pennsylvania
rosamund BRONZE, Devon, Pennsylvania
2 articles 5 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength is nothing more then how well you hide the pain."


Here I am, trapped in the dark, with voices all around me yelling, crying, screaming for help.
But how can I help you If I cant help myself?
I need help. I help you but what do I get in return? Murmmers of "I'm sorry" and then in am comforting you again while you cry. While I, I want to cry, to have someone hold me and tell me it is going to be ok. Is that really that hard? Is it impossible for you to think of anyone but yourself? Here I am being multiple people, never quite myself. Being happy when I want to be sad
Everyone needs me, and I am only one person and everyone is pulling at me, tearing me apart, while I am already broken my brilliant façade is falling apart. I need to get out of here, of this darkness, so I can finally be put back together.



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on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:17 am
AutumnRayne SILVER, Broadview Heights, Ohio
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Mess with me, I can handle it. Mess with my friends, and I will bury you where no one will find you.<br /> *I&#039;m a lover, not a fighter, but I&#039;ll fight for what I love.

haha. ditto. XP

on Nov. 4 2010 at 6:29 pm
rosamund BRONZE, Devon, Pennsylvania
2 articles 5 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Strength is nothing more then how well you hide the pain.&quot;

haha thnxx :)

and i will i jsut need to start writing more i have nothing to write about


on Nov. 4 2010 at 6:07 pm
AutumnRayne SILVER, Broadview Heights, Ohio
6 articles 4 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
*Mess with me, I can handle it. Mess with my friends, and I will bury you where no one will find you.<br /> *I&#039;m a lover, not a fighter, but I&#039;ll fight for what I love.

You are such an awesome writer! how come you never let me read your stuff? this is really such a well- written poem, i love it! keep writing and tell me when you get stuff posted! :D