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He Loves Me He Loves Me Not

October 14, 2010
By Bubblybubbles223 PLATINUM, Warren, Oregon
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people are like tomatoes...theyre red on the inside...and fun to smash...and especially fun to throw at walls. and clowns. and annoying teachers. and pirahnas cuz they say yuck cause theyre vegetables! ~me

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I pull out a flower
And nervously count
But I start to cower
And I’m soon filled with doubt

The last petal lingers
On my frail hand
I barely move my fingers
My heart blares like a band

I drop to the ground
And I start to cry
I don’t make a sound
I ask myself why

For as soon,
As the last petal drops
I get a short text
And my heart about stops

He left me for her
Through all the pain that I’ve fought
He loves me, he loves me

But he loves me not

© Louise T., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
This is a sympathetic peice, inspired by friends and past heartbreaks. It is a poem about heartbreak, recent events, and sheer possibility.
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